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Betty Week 2 Publication (Was also my WWC for observations)

Posted by Beatriz Martínez-Godás on September 2, 2013 at 5:00 PM

 


"Observations"

8/21/2013
LR Fingers through hair,
LT hands submersed in her sweater.
ER Holding herself in perfect composition,
CP looking to the sides, self aware.
DP Then there's finger-pulled hair and jottled leg shakes,
CR chuckling to herself.
SN Perfectly still, furrowed brows, 
KS nervously feeling the sewn edges of the socks.
CA Slouching,
AB covering her notebook slightly while looking up sporadically.
YS Staring.
LB Still.
ML Silent.
GR Nervous. 

8/22/2013

LR Hair tied up, nose inches from paper.
LT
Hands surface from her sweater and grasp on to her hair, 
ER
smudged face resting in the plam of her hand.
CP
"I'm not feeling it".
DP
Hair combed, grin forced,
CR
holding her hair up.
SN
Deep sighs of frustration while rubbing her neck;
KS
Glasses off, chewing gum.
CA
Missing.
AB
Fasts wisps of her pen;
YS
Still hands, restless feet.
LB
Sitting sideways,
ML
impatiently quickening her pace;
GR
Swinging her feet, shoes untied.


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