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Drink You In

Posted by Dez P. on September 28, 2013 at 12:05 AM

The way you dim the lights when your hands glide up and down your vitric curves; sharp enough to the slit the tongues of men who find themselves snakes in your presence


I get you all to myself


How you love to see their lungs rupture

How you tell them, “You’ll only wish you were breathless.”

And how your libidinous lips camber into the last smile they’ll ever see, as they fall one by one


The way you dance for me

The way you slip your clothes off of your seething body, letting them drop to the floor like torrid sex on white souls 

 

I see you just fine


When you let your hair caress the ends of your shoulders as you breathe your angel air; intoxicating the blood that fills your cheeks with their sanguine lust

 

You’re so high, you’re so high


And when you crush yourself into bridled implosions in front of me, bending over, your spine protruding from your tightly-knit skin

How I wish I could scoop out your vertebrae and drop them into my broken glass; let your liquid body pour itself into me and just

Drink

You

In


You’re perfect, I know

 

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8 Comments

Reply andrea
1:52 PM on September 27, 2013 
...
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I caaaaaant
this is too much, man.
it's awesome.
just go get published already
Reply Claudia Roldan
2:03 PM on September 27, 2013 
erfjhewk desiii, this is too good!
Reply Claudia Perez
2:32 PM on September 27, 2013 
OH MY GOD???? OH YM GOD?? I CANT EVNE BELIVE THIS WHAT THE HELL OH YMGOD IM GONNA DIE THIS IS SO GOOD
Reply Laura Camila Rivera
2:42 PM on September 27, 2013 
Marry me?
Reply Sue (El Tigre Chino)
9:15 PM on October 2, 2013 
um.
Reply Sue (El Tigre Chino)
9:18 PM on October 2, 2013 
Sue (El Tigre Chino) says...
um.


that was me feeling totally and completely, utterly inadequate.
Reply Sue (El Tigre Chino)
9:20 PM on October 2, 2013 
Sue (El Tigre Chino) says...
that was me feeling totally and completely, utterly inadequate.


I just used so many adverbs that it should be illegal (and for the same meaning, nonetheless. I can't even comment on things correctly. What have you done to me?)
Reply Laura Tormos
6:08 PM on October 3, 2013 
ummmmmm i hate you byeeeee